Fic Rec: A Hundred Thousand Miles
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221b_recsTitle: A Hundred Thousand Miles LJ AO3
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what_alchemy
Pairing: Gen
Length: 2,107
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Original character death
Verse: Sherlock BBC
Author's summary: Sally Donovan didn’t daydream of being a police officer when she was young.
Reccer's comments: A nuanced, sympathetic character study of Sally Donovan. The Sally of this one-shot is a hard-working, determined, flawed human being, loving and loved. Tragedy mars her childhood, causing her to choose a path that clearly is intended to fix what was destroyed. Food is a central motif: a reflection of familial love, something to be strictly controlled (when all else seems uncontrollable), and one step in the healing process.
What-alchemy's ability to sketch a character swiftly and vividly is admirable:
Sally remembers her father removing her from school on 22nd April, 1995. She was fifteen, he was forty-seven, and when she met him in the head’s office, he was not her father but a waterlogged study in reds and whites, a diminished spectre of himself in the chair. The head herself, a starchy woman with a dour disposition and a belted waist, seemed to be having trouble keeping her own upper lip suitably stiff.
Sally's mother is a wonderful OC, fierce in her love, strong, and set in her ways:
When Mummy drew back long moments later, she wiped Sally’s face with her bare hand, pinching at her nostrils when she was finished. Mummy reached up to wipe that hand on a tea towel, but then she knelt back down to cup Sally’s head with two firm palms. Her black eyes shone with banked fire, and there was no looking away.
“Listen to me, Sally girl. Are you listening?”
Sally’s breath stuttered and a keening whine seemed to be rising from her throat, but she managed to nod.
“You’re whole. A whole person, no matter what anyone else says, no matter where your family’s from, no matter how it feels on the darkest days. And you are exactly as God Almighty made you. No one can take that away from you, understand?”
The Sherlock fandom could use many more quality efforts at rounding out this too-maligned character.
Author:
what_alchemyPairing: Gen
Length: 2,107
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Original character death
Verse: Sherlock BBC
Author's summary: Sally Donovan didn’t daydream of being a police officer when she was young.
Reccer's comments: A nuanced, sympathetic character study of Sally Donovan. The Sally of this one-shot is a hard-working, determined, flawed human being, loving and loved. Tragedy mars her childhood, causing her to choose a path that clearly is intended to fix what was destroyed. Food is a central motif: a reflection of familial love, something to be strictly controlled (when all else seems uncontrollable), and one step in the healing process.
What-alchemy's ability to sketch a character swiftly and vividly is admirable:
Sally remembers her father removing her from school on 22nd April, 1995. She was fifteen, he was forty-seven, and when she met him in the head’s office, he was not her father but a waterlogged study in reds and whites, a diminished spectre of himself in the chair. The head herself, a starchy woman with a dour disposition and a belted waist, seemed to be having trouble keeping her own upper lip suitably stiff.
Sally's mother is a wonderful OC, fierce in her love, strong, and set in her ways:
When Mummy drew back long moments later, she wiped Sally’s face with her bare hand, pinching at her nostrils when she was finished. Mummy reached up to wipe that hand on a tea towel, but then she knelt back down to cup Sally’s head with two firm palms. Her black eyes shone with banked fire, and there was no looking away.
“Listen to me, Sally girl. Are you listening?”
Sally’s breath stuttered and a keening whine seemed to be rising from her throat, but she managed to nod.
“You’re whole. A whole person, no matter what anyone else says, no matter where your family’s from, no matter how it feels on the darkest days. And you are exactly as God Almighty made you. No one can take that away from you, understand?”
The Sherlock fandom could use many more quality efforts at rounding out this too-maligned character.
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